Creepy poster, Tasha McLemore!

What does "active young woman" mean?

I think your logline needs the main character's goal and the stakes.

I agree, let me change it

Here’s a logline template that might help, Tasha McLemore:

“After/when ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a _______ (an adjective that describes the protagonist’s personality and the protagonist's position/role) tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/strives to/sets out to/fights/battles/engages in/participates/competes/etc. _______ (goal of story and try to add the obstacles here) so/in order to ________ (stakes).”

The inciting incident can also be at the end of the logline: “A _______ (an adjective that describes the protagonist’s personality and the protagonist's position/role) tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/strives to/sets out to/fights/battles/engages in/participates/competes/etc. _______ (goal of story and try to add the obstacles here) so/in order to ________ (stakes) after/when ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion).”

Thanks and I know how to write loglines, it is a short, so that is why I made it so short.

You're welcome, Tasha McLemore.

You asked what does "active young woman" mean, that is the adjective that describes her personality.

What do you think now Maurice Vaughan ?

Oh, ok, Tasha McLemore. "Active" as in energetic.

I don't think a producer/director/etc. will understand what the story is about from the logline.

I plan on doing it myself.

Ok, well forget what I said, @Tasha McLemore! Haha Looking forward to seeing your film!