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BAHAMAS TO BEIRUT
By Aidan Robinson
A London oil trader realizes he’ll be $20m short at the end of his company’s fiscal year, so with the help of his colleagues and The Beirut Bandit he pulls an elaborate scam on his nemesis at a rival firm, which involves faking the disappearance of two oil tankers near the Bahamas.
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Bahamas To Beirut sounds fun, Aidan Robinson. I feel like the protagonist and main cast are going to get into a lot of trouble and situations. I’m looking forward to seeing this movie!
I think the logline needs a better flow, and it’s really long right now (52 words).
Here's a logline suggestion: Realizing he’ll be $20m short at the end of his company’s fiscal year, a London oil trader, his colleagues, and The Beirut Bandit pull an elaborate scam on his nemesis at a rival firm, which involves faking the disappearance of two oil tankers near the Bahamas.
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Thank you Maurice Vaughan for taking the time.
You're welcome, Aidan Robinson.