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TIME JUMP

TIME JUMP
By Sylvester Fryson Jr

GENRE: Sci-fi, Adventure
LOGLINE:

In a world where time bends to the will of science, a tropical holiday turns into a fight for the past and future as young inventors challenge a tyrant's plans to control time itself.

SYNOPSIS:

In a world where time is no longer linear, a group of brilliant scientists from Brooklyn, New York, set out on a vacation to Hawaii. While relaxing on the picturesque beaches, they create a breakthrough that changes the course of history forever—the invention of the "Time Jump" device. This groundbreaking technology allows them to traverse through different eras, rewriting the past to create a better future. Initially filled with excitement and optimism, the young scientists embark on a journey to reshape history for the greater good. However, their utopian vision is shattered when they realize that their actions have unwittingly triggered a series of catastrophic events. Their tampering with the past has inadvertently paved the way for the rise of a ruthless future dictator. As chaos unfolds, a female assassin from the dystopian future is sent back in time to eliminate the scientists and ensure the dictator's reign remains unchallenged. Faced with imminent danger and the weight of their unintended consequences, the scientists must race against the clock to undo the mistakes of the watch and restore the timeline before it's too late. 

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David Hall

Hi Sylvester, this is very intriguing, I loved this sentence in your synopsis, '... scientists must race against time to fix the past and prevent catastrophic events from unfolding,' and perhaps thought it should feature in your logline

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