Jason, the logline is solid but doesn't tell us anything. What's the theme? What is the human element? Whose story does this battle revolve around? A person? A group of sailors? An ensemble POV from both sides, like the movie We Were Soldiers? What's the trauma, anxiety, and despair behind this preparation for war? Tell us something we can grab onto, tug at our heartstrings sort of way. Is it a pseudo-documentary-style animation? A comedy ala Pixar-style? Keep up the great writing, my friend!