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THE RED BARON
By Jason Sacchi
The Red Baron tests his prototype Fokker Triplane against the Royal Flying Corps.
SYNOPSIS:
The Red Baron leads his squadron to patrol the skies of the Western Front, he hopes the prototype triplane will give his side an advantage over the Royal Flying Corps.
THE RED BARON
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Hey Jason Sacchi, this looks like fun. Thank you for sharing. It might be good if you define the Red Baron's stakes - win or lose. What is his exact struggle? We can assume it's life or death, but why is his life or death significant? Who exactly is his antagonist (individual in RFC?). Just need a bit more info to get a better feel of it.
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The Red Baron struggles to get more kills to his credit by shooting down the RFC Squadron. Because survival is the key to the Red Baron's victory. Herbert Rowley is the main antagonist of the Great War: The Animated Series episode, "The Red Baron."
Thank you all for your input.