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ECHO CHAMBER
By Leah Tibbets
When a serial killer targets a former CIA agent’s loved ones, a deadly game of cat and mouse ensues, unraveling the agent into paranoia and madness as he confronts the monster within himself.
SYNOPSIS:
When a former CIA agent's loved ones become the victims of a brutal serial killer, he becomes obsessed with revealing the identity of the culprit. As his investigation unfolds, he becomes increasingly unhinged, and the lines between reality and paranoia begin to blur.
As the body count rises, the agent's grip on reality continues to descend into madness, as he becomes further convinced that someone is planning to make him their next victim. As the agent becomes caught in a game of cat and mouse trying to uncover the identity of the person toying with him and killing the people he cares about, he struggles to confront the monster within himself.
ECHO CHAMBER
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Thanks Eon! His name was originally Jack but I thought perhaps that's too common of a name so I switched it to Curtis, this is an older script that still needs editing even though it is finished. Maybe one day I'll get the guts to post it!
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Hey Leah Tibbets, interesting stuff! Here's my (unsolicited haha) version: After a reclusive surveillance expert uncovers an enigmatic figure's plot to [?] through the manipulation of a city's closed-circuit television network his discovery plummets him into a labyrinthine underworld of voyeurism fueled by paranoia. As he inches closer to the truth the harsh realization is that he is actually the one being surveilled, stalked, and hunted
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Thanks Mike! I appreciate ya. I am always here for unsolicited advice from other professionals :) One day I hope to co-write a screenplay with someone far more experienced than me. I want to learn and grow! Hope you have a great night.
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Leah Tibbets I find "helping" with others' loglines helps me! Still trying to force my brain into the weird screenwriting realm... Cheers to ya from The East Coast!
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I totally get that Mike! I agree with you. Thank you by the way. :) Cheers from the South Central!
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Thank you Arthur!
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Thank you Marcos
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Thank you Tasha, thank you everyone!
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Thanks Nate! Also just so everyone knows, the logline and synopsis are now being worked on more to fit the screenplay, I'm probably going to edit this a million times before I finish the entire screenplay but I appreciate all the helpful feedback. Y'all are wonderful!
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