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WHEN JIM MET TIM
By Thorsten Schade
A man with a dog phobia is given the worst possible therapy animal: an ancient dog demon.
SYNOPSIS:
James Murphy (26) is a successful advertising executive in
LA. His boss assigns him the task of developing an
advertising campaign for a well-known dog food brand. No one
suspects that James harbors a deep-seated phobia of dogs.
After a panic attack nearly costs him his job, he turns to
psychotherapist Akiko Furukawa (38) for help.
But Furukawa has her own dark agenda. She wants to get rid of an ancient demon.
For James, this marks the beginning of a nightmare
that will change his life forever.
When JIM met TIM is a unic character journey set against a backdrop of mythological terror and personal fear.
COMPS: The Omen meets Turner&Hooch meets Shaun of the dead
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Intriguing open to a story. To make this logline truly sing, try to expand on what essentially is the set-up. Where's the conflict? What is the central story dilemma? What are the stakes? Who or what ends up opposing the lead's goal? If you can touch on these, then you'll have a logline that has a greater chance of piquing the interests of industry people.
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Phil Clarke Hi Phil, thanks for your suggestions. I have created another pitch for producers as a result. As for the public pitch, I'll leave it as it is.
Hi guys, thank you very much for your interest and your rating. :-)
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