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AUTONOMY

AUTONOMY
By Nicholas Rizzolo

GENRE: Horror
LOGLINE:

After a vicious evolutionary anomaly kills her entire lab during a science expedition, a traumatized researcher must escape from scientists eager to study its monstrous offspring.

Maurice Vaughan

This sounds interesting, Nicholas Rizzolo. I think your logline needs more info. The logline just has the setup right now. I suggest adding the story goal and the stakes.

Nicholas Rizzolo

Thanks for the feedback. The stakes are currently, "A young researcher’s life turns into a nightmare," but I’m struggling to provide more context without adding too much detail.

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Nicholas Rizzolo. I meant the stakes if she doesn't reach the story goal.

Something like "After a creature in the Amazon attacks and impregnates her, a young researcher tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/sets out to/fights/battles/etc. _______ (goal of story and try to add the obstacles here) to/so/in order to ________ (stakes)."

Nicholas Rizzolo

A more accurate version is: After a creature in the Amazon attacks and impregnates her, a young researcher must fight for her life when scientists kidnap her to study the it's offspring.

Maurice Vaughan

I like that logline, Nicholas Rizzolo!

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