After a vicious evolutionary anomaly kills her entire lab during a science expedition, a traumatized researcher must escape from scientists eager to study its monstrous offspring.
This sounds interesting, Nicholas Rizzolo. I think your logline needs more info. The logline just has the setup right now. I suggest adding the story goal and the stakes.
Thanks for the feedback. The stakes are currently, "A young researcher’s life turns into a nightmare," but I’m struggling to provide more context without adding too much detail.
You're welcome, Nicholas Rizzolo. I meant the stakes if she doesn't reach the story goal.
Something like "After a creature in the Amazon attacks and impregnates her, a young researcher tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/sets out to/fights/battles/etc. _______ (goal of story and try to add the obstacles here) to/so/in order to ________ (stakes)."
A more accurate version is: After a creature in the Amazon attacks and impregnates her, a young researcher must fight for her life when scientists kidnap her to study the it's offspring.
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This sounds interesting, Nicholas Rizzolo. I think your logline needs more info. The logline just has the setup right now. I suggest adding the story goal and the stakes.
1 person likes this
Thanks for the feedback. The stakes are currently, "A young researcher’s life turns into a nightmare," but I’m struggling to provide more context without adding too much detail.
You're welcome, Nicholas Rizzolo. I meant the stakes if she doesn't reach the story goal.
Something like "After a creature in the Amazon attacks and impregnates her, a young researcher tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/sets out to/fights/battles/etc. _______ (goal of story and try to add the obstacles here) to/so/in order to ________ (stakes)."
1 person likes this
A more accurate version is: After a creature in the Amazon attacks and impregnates her, a young researcher must fight for her life when scientists kidnap her to study the it's offspring.
I like that logline, Nicholas Rizzolo!
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