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WHAT IF
By Dian F.

GENRE: Drama, Animation
LOGLINE:

A child wakes up with a different life, exactly like she wanted all this time. Until she realizes, in her new life, she is not as happy as she imagined, especially because she is always followed by an invisible being wherever she goes.

SYNOPSIS:

Fami, 12 years old girl, live with her parents and one big brother. Her father and mother are working parents. And her teenager brother has his own world.  Fami’s parents always busy with their business and job, so does her brother. He is busy go out with his friends. Fami, who is pretty shy and quiet child, feels her family doesn’t have much time for her.  Not just that. Fami also feels her family always ignore her and didn’t give enough attention for her. Sometimes she imagines she has life like her neighbor’s child life. Fami always sees how neighbor’s child always has time to spend together with his parents. All this time, by staring out the window, Fami knows what kind of life she wants it.

One day, Fami’s parents have to leave her and her brother alone at home. That day, not like the other day, strangely, Fami doesn’t feel sad or complain because her parents have to work on weekend. Even though, without parent’s permission, her brother also planning to go out with his friends. Fami doesn’t feel sad at all. Maybe because she gets used to about this situation. When she is alone at home, she takes initiative to clean the house. Fami enjoys what she’s doing, even she gets really excited that day. So enthusiastic is she, that an accident occurred. Fami slipped and falls. Her head hitting floor.

After losing consciousness, Fami wakes up. She realizes that her life has changed. Now, she has life that she always wanted. She is happy with her new life. But in her a new life, Fami has been followed by a strange creature. This creature tells Fami, that it knows Fami for very long time and Fami also know it.  But Fami doubts that. Especially because she is the only one who could hear and see that creature. Because of her distrust and Fami feels that this creature is bothering her, it often causes conflict between the two and also Fami’s new life.

Nathaniel Baker

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