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Aish, a young woman from Baghdad, has lived her life under the watchful eyes of her strict parents. Bound by her deep faith and cultural traditions, she dreams of a world beyond her confines—a life where she can explore her independence. When she finally gets an opportunity to work abroad, her desire for freedom comes true, but it also brings unforeseen challenges. In a new country, Aish crosses paths with Ferah, a wealthy, carefree playboy from Turkey, who seemingly has it all but hides a wounded soul. Unlike Aish, Ferah shuns the idea of religion and commitment, believing they only bring pain. Their initial encounters are fraught with clashes as their opposing lifestyles and beliefs collide. As fate intertwines their lives, an unexpected connection grows between them. Aish's resilience and strong moral compass challenge Ferah’s cynical worldview, while his openness and hidden vulnerabilities make her question her fears of love and trust. Together, they navigate personal struggles, cultural differences, and the ghosts of their pasts. But can two people from such different worlds overcome their insecurities and fears to find solace in each other? Or will their differences keep them apart? "How Come We End Up Together?" is a heartfelt story of love, self-discovery, and the power of connection.
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This looks great!!
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Hi, Ayesha Khan. I remember you posting about this script before. I think your logline is better, but it could be tightened up, and I think "to discover if love can bridge the impossible" is vague.
Here's a logline suggestion: Escaping her strict upbringing, a devout young woman collides with a carefree playboy guarding a painful secret, and they fight to overcome clashing beliefs and hidden scars to _________
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Okay thank you Maurice Vaughan I'll try to write like this
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Thanks Mark Deuce
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You're welcome, @Ayesha.