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Two friends, trapped in loveless marriages, reconnect and ignite a passionate affair that curdles into obsession, driving them to dangerous extremes.
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Working Title: Till Death Do Us In
Claire is suffocating in a hollow marriage to David whose cold indifference has eroded every trace of warmth. When she accidentally reconnects with Mark—a married construction manager stifled by his wife Jessica’s ambition—their shared despair ignites a passionate, ill-fated affair.
What they don’t know is that their respective spouses are already entangled in an affair with each other—one far more perverse than Claire and Mark’s desperate escape.
As Claire and Mark’s passion curdles into obsession, their private resentments fester. Claire fixates on Jessica as the root of their problem; Mark fantasizes about David vanishing. Neither speaks of their dark thoughts—until Claire, in a moment of twisted vulnerability, asks the unthinkable: What if Jessica were gone?
Struck by guilt, Mark recoils and ends the affair. But the separation is short-lived. Their need for each other, already strong, is now laced with the dangerous belief that true love is worth killing for.
In a fateful climax, both set their mutual plans in motion—each unaware the other is doing the same. But when a shocking revelation they never saw coming exposes the truth about their spouses, Claire and Mark confront the real question: Who’s been playing who all along?
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Catchy title, Marc Serhan. "In a fateful climax, both set their mutual plans in motion—each unaware the other is doing the same." Whoa! Till Death Do Us In sounds like a wild Romance Thriller! I'm not sure if your logline needs "soon," but that's a tiny thing. I'm looking forward to watching this!
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Thank you, Maurice. You're right, taking out 'soon'.
You're welcome, @Marc. Hope a producer scoops up your script!
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