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REST IN WAR - PILOT EPISODE - FATES REWRITTEN

REST IN WAR - PILOT EPISODE - FATES REWRITTEN
By Amanda Alencar

GENRE: Historical, Drama
LOGLINE:

"During the Nazi occupation of Poland, a resistance fighter is torn from her family and
sent to a concentration camp. Meanwhile, a young German officer, raised under the
Reich’s ideology, begins to question everything he believed. As their paths collide in a
brutal war, both must decide whether to fight for survival—or for something greater."

SYNOPSIS:

"Rest In War is a gripping historical drama set in the darkest days of World War II,

exploring the blurred lines between morality, survival, and human transformation. At its

core, it follows a Polish resistance fighter, Lena Kowalski, who is torn from her family

and sent to Auschwitz. There, she crosses paths with Thomas Schauren, a young Nazi

officer raised under the Reich’s ideology, who slowly begins to question everything he

was taught.

As war consumes everything around them, both are faced with impossible choices: to

betray their beliefs, to fight for survival, or to surrender to the ghosts of their past. In a

world where humanity is stripped away, can love exist? And if it does… what price

must be paid?"

REST IN WAR - PILOT EPISODE - FATES REWRITTEN

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Rutger Oosterhoff

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Rutger Oosterhoff

Hi Amanda,

Two things:

(1) Cut the scene numbers in your screenplay, that's only for production screenplays, not specs.

(2) When a sentence cuts off, the 'white margin' in between is too big; like this, your whole screenplay becomes a blur. Check your margins in your screenwriting sofwarre and readjust.

Best, Rutger

Tasha Lewis

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Amanda Alencar

Rutger Oosterhoff Hi Rutger,

Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback. I truly appreciate it!

I wasn’t aware of the scene numbers being an issue in spec scripts, but I’ll make sure to remove them moving forward. Also, I’ll double-check the formatting and margins to make the script easier to read.

Your advice means a lot, thank you again for taking the time!

Best,

Amanda.

Amanda Alencar

Hi Tasha Lewis

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and rate my logline.

I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Amanda.

Leonardo Ramirez

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Leonardo Ramirez

Can't wait to see this Amanda Alencar.

Amanda Alencar

Leonardo Ramirez Thank you so much Leonardo for taking the time to read and rate my logline.

I'm so glad you liked it.

I have to confess, it's a dream of mine to one day see this project come alive on screen.

All the best,

Amanda.

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