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A wealthy Middle Eastern heir turned New York financier lives a flawless life of control, commanding boardrooms by day and hiding forbidden desires by night until one secret interaction leaves a digital evidence, threatening his empire, his family legacy, and the identity he’s spent his life hiding.
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Hi Ehad, I really like your logline, it promises an interesting take on success and a hidden past.
If you want to improve it a bit, you might consider removing some extra details (right now it’s a bit overloaded) and focus only on the conflict and hook. Hope this helps!