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When a harmless farm experiment sparks a galactic misunderstanding, a Martian tomato farmer finds himself in a battle with Earth’s bureaucracy, rogue inventions, and one very hungry cow. Welcome to Marty's farm, where retro sci-fi meets hilarious absurdity.
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It's a quiet night on Mars... until a blazing light tears across the sky and a spaceship crashes onto Marty's farm. With a weary sigh of 'Not again...', Marty hauls it to his growing junk heap. Back at the farm, the ever-hungry cow, Serinabelle, chews on a chunk of his tractor, sparking an idea. Soon, Serinabelle is happily snacking through the space junk, turning chaos into gain. Along the way, Marty's BFF and neighbor builds a communication device that accidentally DMs Earth, and his once studious teenage daughter has joined a punk band. Just another day on the farm...
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I can't wait to watch this series, @Neal! Incredible artwork!
I suggest giving the Martian tomato farmer an adjective (the main flaw he has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes his personality) in the logline. It'll give producers, directors, etc. more insight into his character.
And I suggest taking out "Welcome to Marty's farm, where retro sci-fi meets hilarious absurdity." I think that'd fit better in the synopsis and/or pitch.
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Thank you Maurice Vaughan
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You had me at Martian tomato farmer.
You're welcome, Neal Jamison.