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By Jace Serrano
After a tense breakup, a secretive cop embarks on her first relationship with a man -- but is forced to protect them both when she’s terrorized by her ex, an unstable police sergeant.
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This sounds thrilling, Jace Serrano! It's like a Romantic/Thriller version of "Lakeview Terrace."
You have a nice logline, but I think it needs some work. Here's a logline suggestion: "After a tense breakup with her sergeant, a secretive cop fights to protect herself and the new man she's dating from her unstable ex."
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