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By Travis Seppala
When a trio of college students invent a teleportation device, they find themselves on the run from a secret military operation that wants their technology.
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Sounds exciting, Travis Seppala! I think you just need to beef up the end of your logline. Something like: ...they find themselves on the run from a secret military operation that'll do anything for their technology.
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