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TO WALK IN DARKNESS
By Adam King
After she fails to stop the wanton killing of a homeless girl in London, the orphaned daughter of a Yakuza assassin turns rogue against the rival crime syndicate controlling her and teams up with the seasoned hitman hired to kill her.
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This sounds like an entertaining story, Adam, but the second half of the logline is long. A reader will get winded reading it.
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