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MORNING STEEP
By Landis Stokes
Morning Steep is a story about a mother introducing her young son to the realities of their cultural heritage as African Americans over a cup of tea.
SYNOPSIS:
A mother gives her young son, "the talk". For African American families, it's not about the "birds and the bees." It's about racism and prejudice.
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Just a suggestion: "Over a cup of tea, an African American mother introduces her young son to the realities of their cultural heritage." It's essentially the same as what you wrote, but the structure feels stronger to me??? Also, I don't think you need to repeat the title in your logline. But I'm learning as well as everyone else here, so open to comments! And good luck with your script!
I like it! Thank you, Herman Johansen. Yes, I'm learning just like everyone else. Thx!
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Great suggestion, Herman!
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