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After a dramatic event puts his life in turmoil, a man reevaluates the decision to move his family from New York City to Des Moines, Iowa and now must prove that he made the right choice for them.
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Dialogue in this is very natural and smooth, easy back-and-forth between characters. Nice!
Awesome Mark! Thanks for reading!
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Dialogue in this is very natural and smooth, easy back-and-forth between characters. Nice!
Awesome Mark! Thanks for reading!