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THE GOOD SOLDIER
By Matthew H Emma
A Jewish-American GI must prevent vengeful concentration camp survivors from exacting revenge against Nazi soldiers after his unit captures a bombed out Berlin building.
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I like Pamela's suggestion, but would still want more as to what the camp survivors face as an obstacle
James, I agree that Pamela's version is a good encapsulation, but the summation deals with a specific aspect of the story and not the protagonist's primary goal.
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I really like this logline Matthew. Sorry Pamela. First time I can say someone's is better than yours. lol.So i don't agree James.
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Solid
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Thanks R.D. From your lips to the Big Man's ears.