While a bit on the nose, this variation on the Angel saving a life theme (think "It's a Wonderful Life") is worth exploring. Since working with children and animals is a firm production No-no (that's a double), I'd love to see a dozen variations in logline form. Change the characters, but keep the Angel and Victim roles.
Replace the troublesome extra (the dog) with something manageable, like a pizza delivery guy. Brainstorm 5-10 different situations and locations (abandoned house, ghetto, beach, restaurant kitchen, etc).
Loglines are pitching instruments aimed at producers, not to be confused with taglines aimed at viewers. Thus, the end has to be revealed. The correct logline is:
"When a man tries to commit suicide in the forest, a girl scout comes by and changes his mind."
Rated this logline
Rated this logline
When a man trying to commit suicide is cought by a girl scout... {what happens ?}
While a bit on the nose, this variation on the Angel saving a life theme (think "It's a Wonderful Life") is worth exploring. Since working with children and animals is a firm production No-no (that's a double), I'd love to see a dozen variations in logline form. Change the characters, but keep the Angel and Victim roles.
Replace the troublesome extra (the dog) with something manageable, like a pizza delivery guy. Brainstorm 5-10 different situations and locations (abandoned house, ghetto, beach, restaurant kitchen, etc).
Loglines are pitching instruments aimed at producers, not to be confused with taglines aimed at viewers. Thus, the end has to be revealed. The correct logline is:
"When a man tries to commit suicide in the forest, a girl scout comes by and changes his mind."