GENRE: Sci-fi, Thriller, War
LOGLINE:
Deadly spy craft, global warfare, and military tyranny shake the four corners of the earth. In a world where presidents are fleeing for their lives and nation states are collapsing, the Red Raven empire emerges. As evil men play the game of power, their schemes are continuously challenged by a young female journalist with everything to live for.
What I read so far was interesting and good,a bit of a Top Gun feel to it. Your logline sounds a bit worn, sorry to put it like that, but it needs a spin. It sounds like something that has been done before possibly because it has, and even though you know your screenplay is different and maybe more exciting etc, the producer does not, he is going to go by the logline.
What I read so far was interesting and good,a bit of a Top Gun feel to it. Your logline sounds a bit worn, sorry to put it like that, but it needs a spin. It sounds like something that has been done before possibly because it has, and even though you know your screenplay is different and maybe more exciting etc, the producer does not, he is going to go by the logline.
I modified the logline