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ABK: ALIEN BUTT KICKER
By Chris Robertson
As the lunar outpost new sheriff is a legendary warrior who in reality is nothing but a drunken idiot stirring up trouble with aliens to put the town in danger, a savvy group of teens use smoke and mirrors to save the day while propping up the Alien Butt Kicker's rep to ward off future attacks.
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Is KBD the group, Chris Robertson?
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Actually, a group wrote this logline so I shelved it here. KBD is the renowned hero who in actuality is a complete drunken idiot. The group streamlined the logline too much for my liking as it felt it lost some of the series. Thanks for the comment.
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I like the new logline better, Chris Robertson. Is KBD the main character? If so, maybe you should put him first in the logline, then the ragtag group.
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