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In desperation they propelled their children into the future, combined with all their parents magic that they might take on and defeat Icaris. First they have to master their skills, time as ticking as the Witchwar has begun....
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Okay here is a logline from my first screenplay. The screenplay needs a rewrite. Do you think the logline does too?