Anna Brüner: Concept artist, illustrator and photographer (still) in Chicago, Illinois.

Lisa Beuk
Logline

Hello All! I'm wondering if anyone would want to give me some input on my logline for my Thiiller feature screenplay. I'm not sure if it's good, bad or okay? Thank you in advance! Logline: After becoming stranded in a treacherous snow storm, a woman must face the demons from her past to save her family from the ruthless man hunting them.

Bill Hunter

I think the issue with your log line is vagueness. You want to give just enough details to make us want more but not giving away too much. You must give us three things in your log line; the main char...

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Lisa Beuk

Thank you Bill! Great advise!

David Kurtz

I agree, your logline is a little vague, but has promise!

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