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ANTONI-A

ANTONI-A
By Miguel Miller

GENRE: Mystery, Drama
LOGLINE:

A tormented transgender person is interrogated by a caring detective after a closeted client is found murdered in a motel.

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This dark short film portrays a shocking story that may not be too far from a possible reality that some transgender people have unfortunately faced or could face. The exclusion, misjudgment, confusion and frustration that the protagonist goes through, is something that the LGBTQ community can easily relate to and/or understand. However, there are misconceptions and sometimes not enough information about being transgender. Our main purpose is to bring awareness about this social issue..

SYNOPSIS:

Antonia is a transgender sex worker with a troubled past that we discover while detective Ana Frank is interrogating her. Bloodied and beaten by Mr. Silverman, her client, Antonia relays the harrowing events that caused her bruises and his death.

On a routine night working the streets, she comes across a familiar face looking for sex. Antonia quivers initially, but, decides to get into the client’s car. Inside the motel room, a skittish Antonia and a reassured Mr. Silverman kiss passionately. The more they kiss and grope one another, the more Antonia wonders if the man responsible for her near-daily beatings, when she was 7, recognizes her.

Detective Frank carefully probes for more details, possibly a motive. Antonia encroaches with incriminating information. She speaks about her father being embarrassed by his gay son and the shame it brings to the family.

After hours of interrogation, Ana uncuffs a bewildered Antonia. The formidable detective softens to Antonia and offers her a consoling hand.

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Marcos Fizzotti

Hello Miguel! Your logline is very good, but I would change it in a way to place the inciting incident first: 'When a closeted client is found murdered in a motel, a tormented transgender person has to face an interrogation by a caring detective.'

Miguel Miller

Thank you so much Mr. Fizzotti

Marcos Fizzotti

You're welcome, Miguel.

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