Love to chat with you about a screenplay project. New Material Thanks Aimee
Love to chat with you about a screenplay project. New Material Thanks Aimee
Hey Paul, I just finished rewriting my script, "Left"--about the struggling NASCAR driver forced to steal drugs from a federal lockup. I wanted to say a big fat THANK YOU for your comments on it! I followed your suggestions, cut out some characters, and shaved 33 pages off it! Now it's a svelte 87 p...
Expand postHey Paul, I just finished rewriting my script, "Left"--about the struggling NASCAR driver forced to steal drugs from a federal lockup. I wanted to say a big fat THANK YOU for your comments on it! I followed your suggestions, cut out some characters, and shaved 33 pages off it! Now it's a svelte 87 pages, and hopefully a much tighter story. I'm going to let it chill for a couple of weeks, then put a final polish on it and send it off the Page Awards. I couldn't have done it without you, thanks again!
Hey Lyn, thanks for the network request! I'm always thrilled to learn that there are other screenwriters in our little town. I work at Central Park Liquor, say "Hi" if you're in the store.
Hi Aimee, I was surprised to see the same. In Denver doing some work with Lighthouse Writers, will look you up when I get back to the Boat.
That would be delightful, I would love to hear about your adventures. I'm at the liquor store Monday through Friday.
LOG LINE: Sick of being bullied in school, Ralph Thompson devises a macabre plan to teach the bullies a valuable lesson that they'll never forget.
Just a suggestion. Try this: Sick of being bullied, Ralph, a chemistry major, decides to teach his tormentors a lesson they may not survive.
Hi Anthony, I greatly appreciate your suggestion.Thanks.
Hi Aimee, it's in the genre of sci fiction/non fiction.
Great article, thank you! I think it's going to help me write both women and men characters--after all we're all just people, each with our own unique personalities. Characters should be rich and interesting no matter what gender the are!
Well said, Aimee, character is key. Glad you enjoyed the blog :)
Thank you, I just wish it was that easy to actually create rich and interesting characters!
Okay this is a bit ranty, forgive me, I just got back from the gym :) Here's the thing: Great scripts are very hard to find! If a producer is interested in your script, I bet he's much more excited about it than he sounds on the phone or email. He's probably told a bunch of people how he's found...
Expand postOkay this is a bit ranty, forgive me, I just got back from the gym :)
Here's the thing: Great scripts are very hard to find! If a producer is interested in your script, I bet he's much more excited about it than he sounds on the phone or email. He's probably told a bunch of people how he's found this script that's quite interesting. Call his bluff on the first offer, and maybe the second and the third too. Sly Stallone called their bluff on the first offer they gave him on Rocky and kept saying no, and the offer kept going up and up and up to like 10 times the first one!!! Don't go by the tone of his phone or email or his stock statements like "That's really all we can do for an unproduced writer, it's a low budget film, etc.". He needs your script to give his life meaning. Meaning ain't cheap.
Now I'm not hating on producers but producers are BUSINESSMEN and anyone who has worked even 3 months selling stereos at Circuit City has a bunch of tricks they can use to get a screenwriter to sign over their script for much less than it's worth. It's not that businessmen are bad, they're just wired completely differently from artists. Artists get excited about their creations and their characters and the worlds they make. Businessmen get excited when they realize some new way to cut costs and they plug it into Excel and it results in a 4% increase in profits.
The truth is without that awesome 106-page invention that the screenwriter has devised out of nothing but thin air and their own inspiration, talented cinematographers, makeup artists, directors, and actors are sitting on their couch at home twiddling their thumbs looking for guidance in their lives. It's impossible to understate the importance of the screenwriter's contribution - in fact it's more a creation than a contribution.
Let's face it the WGA minimums are too low. For example, I'm an unproduced writer, and on a film with a $5m production budget, I believe I deserve at least $100,000! I don't care what precedents have already been set for writer compensation. I don't care that Tarantino sold his first script for $30k. If you're investing $5m in something, that means you hope to make at least $1m in net profits off it, that is a reasonable minimum hope for profit (20%). So of that $5m, I'm asking for 1/50th of your investment and I'm providing the key raw material that attracts the other elements. If you were selling leather jackets, I think you would spend more than 1/50th on the leather, right?
And if I'm wrong or I don't understand the math at play, then by all means enlighten me but come with something better than "That's industry standard" or "That's what's in the budget."
And to anyone who did sell a script for a small fee, I'm not criticizing you one bit, just musing on the power dynamic here which seems to highly favor the producer. No surprise there, but i think writers can push back more, be more Stallone-esque.
Okay that's enough ranting for today.
Bummer. Life always gets in the way.
Sounds like the moral of the story is trust your gut! 'Cause let's face it, nobody can plan for love triangle deal breakers.
I'm a novelist and screenwriter in Houston Texas. I've published 5 science fiction novels and over the last 20 years I've written more than 50 screenplays, short and feature length. Some I've written...
Expand commentI'm a novelist and screenwriter in Houston Texas. I've published 5 science fiction novels and over the last 20 years I've written more than 50 screenplays, short and feature length. Some I've written for me, of which severaL have sold, and some I've been hired to write for others. As to short scripts I've had over a dozen produced or are in the process of being produced. The features ar just coming into their own. There's an animated feature in production off one of my novels and three other features are in development. If I charged guild minimum here in Houston I'd never sell anything. For me, It isn't so much the money as getting the story up for the the world to enjoy. First and foremost I'm a story teller. I teach two writing classes and I work with kids, for free, in the art of writing.
Hi all, I know this will be hugely subjective, but I am fascinated to know which you consider to be the most beautiful work of animation ever, and why, please. I don't mind if the content is for kids or adults, or what media (film/TV/web), I just want to hear your thoughts. Also, I don't mind if you...
Expand postHi all, I know this will be hugely subjective, but I am fascinated to know which you consider to be the most beautiful work of animation ever, and why, please. I don't mind if the content is for kids or adults, or what media (film/TV/web), I just want to hear your thoughts. Also, I don't mind if you cite a particular director or illustrator for their style, rather than a specific property. My reason for asking is that I've been asked by potential investors in my project whether I'd consider animation (it was originally conceptualised and has been developed this far as a live action property). If I do go this route, I would want it to be breath-takingly beautiful and distinctive but my own knowledge of animation is not vast. The project is for girls aged 8-12 in the last chapter of childhood. My personal preference is along the lines of Hayao Miyazaki's work but I would really value your insights. Thanks so much! Bridget
Appleseed (2004) Masamune Shirow wrote this and Ghost in a Shell (1995). Literally every aspect of the animation production out shines the gold standard Akira (1988). Normally rotoscoped animation pro...
Expand commentAppleseed (2004) Masamune Shirow wrote this and Ghost in a Shell (1995). Literally every aspect of the animation production out shines the gold standard Akira (1988). Normally rotoscoped animation provides the smoothest, most fluid motion when it comes to animation. They over-achieved this feat. I'm guessing the frame rate was over 24 frames a second. The clip on IMDb doesn't do it justice. Watch it on Netflix or DVD/Blu-ray. My favorite animated movies in no particular order are: Chico & Rita (2010), Heavy Metal (1981), Ghost in a Shell (1995), Vampire Hunter D (1985), Ninja Scroll (1993), Devil Man (1987), Akira (1988), Transformers the Movie (1986), The Lord of the Rings (1978), The Plague Dogs (1982), Felidae (1994), Wizards (1977), Fire and Ice (1983), Who Framed Roger Rabbit (1988), Appleseed (2004), Robotech The Movie (1986), The Secret of Nimh (1982), 101 Dalmatians (1961), The Fox and the Hound (1981), Lady and the Tramp (1955), Fantasia (1940 & 1999), Animal Farm (1954), The Animatrix (2003), Charlotte's Web (1973), A Cat in Paris (2010), African Tales (2009), G.I. Joe: The Movie (1987). I'm gonna stop because literally I could write an encyclopedia on animation. Emotionally-- Fantasia (1940 & 1999), Charlotte's Web (1973), the Robotech episode where Rick's uncle got killed, Charlie Brown holiday specials. Visually-- Appleseed (2004), Who Framed Roger Rabbit (1988). What I can watch repeatedly -- Heavy Metal (1981) CGI animation I can appreciate I have quite a few on DVD, but I grew up on cel shaded, hand painted cartoons. The only CGI movie I would recommend is Bolt. Hope my rambling memory trip helped.
This is so wonderful, and just what I was hoping for. Thanks very much. I've got some homework to do!
There's a TON of amazing animation in the world that I deeply love for many reasons, but for shear beauty, both in the story AND art: Miyazaki's "Spirited Away" and "Princess Mononoke"! Good question by the way!
As a Sci-Fi/Comic Book/Game fan walking into a Con is like coming home. Ask any nerd, geek, fanboy (or girl), Trekkie, Whovian, Storm Trooper, Brown Coat, whatever. Suddenly you're immersed in your dearest fantasy with a few thousand of your best friends. Everyone completely understands your nearly...
Expand postAs a Sci-Fi/Comic Book/Game fan walking into a Con is like coming home. Ask any nerd, geek, fanboy (or girl), Trekkie, Whovian, Storm Trooper, Brown Coat, whatever. Suddenly you're immersed in your dearest fantasy with a few thousand of your best friends. Everyone completely understands your nearly palpable passion for fictional worlds and characters. It's not weird, or wrong, it's awesome! Coming back to reality is tough. Explaining why the Con was so amazing to people who'll never get it, is frustrating. These people aren't bad people; they're your co-workers, friends, and loved ones. They just can't quite grasp the magic in your passion. I'd like a gently term to describe these folks. Any suggestions?
When you write your character bios what kind of details do you list? There is no right or wrong way, in fact, my bios differ drastically from project to project, but I'm always looking for ways to expand on them. This is a generic bio that I sometimes start with. It includes a list of details and th...
Expand postWhen you write your character bios what kind of details do you list? There is no right or wrong way, in fact, my bios differ drastically from project to project, but I'm always looking for ways to expand on them. This is a generic bio that I sometimes start with. It includes a list of details and then an interview section with questions that you ask your character. Character Profile Name: Age: Height: Weight: Birth Date: Hair: Eyes: Birthplace: Other Facial Features/Other Appearance Details: Dress (Style, colors): Description of Home: Dominant Character Trait: Secondary Character Trait: Best Friend: Other Friends: Enemies and Why: Family: What kind of Person is character with others: Sees self as: Is seen by others as: Sense of Humor: Temper: Basic Nature: Ambitions: Educational background: Work Experience: Philosophy of life: Habits: Talents: Hobbies/past times: Choice of Entertainment: What trait will make Character come alive: Why is character likeable: Why is character lovable: Personal Interview with Character (write in the character’s voice) Occupation: Current Home: Marital Status: Children: Favorite pig out food: Favorite performer/author/sportsman: New Years resolution: Nobody knows I am: I wish I could stop: I’m a sucker for: The worst part of my life is: I want to teach my children that: A good time for me is: The worst advice that my father gave me was: I thought I was grown up when: When I feel sorry for myself I: Nobody would believe me if they saw me: My friends like me because: My pet peeve is: My major accomplishment: I can die happy when:
...Confess it, you've been trolling us the whole time, haven't you?
I don't bother with character bios. Write the story! Your characters will inform you.
Pj, that's great, I thought I was the only one who felt that way. For me, character bios are slightly above espn.com in terms of Writing Avoidance Strategies. Does it really matter if Hannibal Lecter...
Expand commentPj, that's great, I thought I was the only one who felt that way. For me, character bios are slightly above espn.com in terms of Writing Avoidance Strategies. Does it really matter if Hannibal Lecter drinks Diet Coke, Jolt Cola or Lemonade? All that matters is what's in the scene. The rest is up to the audience's imagination - the writer doesn't have to know these details any more than they do.
Hi Emiliano! Nice to meet you. I love to hear about people working in Colorado, it gives me hope that maybe I don't have to move to California--it's a beautiful place, I just prefer Colorado. I'm also a huge fan of animation, it's what I really want to write for. What sort of things are you working on?
I am in the early stages of writing a short script, like any of my scripts I'm struggling to consolidate a big wordy idea of what my theme is into a simple statement to hold the story together. Anybody have any tips or tricks on creating simple, strong themes?
Hey Kerry, thanks so much for the tips, it's exactly what I needed! I looked at all I had written about what my theme should be and the question jumped right out: is revenge worth the lives of your cr...
Expand commentHey Kerry, thanks so much for the tips, it's exactly what I needed! I looked at all I had written about what my theme should be and the question jumped right out: is revenge worth the lives of your crew? For the antagonist is an easy yes. But it should be a pretty tough choice for my protagonist as he's held onto this quest for revenge much longer than he's known his crew for. This should keep me on track, I really appreciate your words of wisdom!
Really glad I could help.
(And humility requires me to once more mention that this is not an original idea of mine. My genius is in remembering it.) :)
Hi Aimee! I used to ski in Steamboat Springs. Never got beyond intermediate though. Once got trapped in the canyon leading back to Denver during a rain-sleet storm that caused a rock slide. Many year's later, that experience made it into one of my screenplays.
Nice! Well, not that you got caught in a rock slide, but that you were later able to use that. When I first moved to town, twenty years ago, I snowboarded all the time. But it's a pretty expensive hab...
Expand commentNice! Well, not that you got caught in a rock slide, but that you were later able to use that. When I first moved to town, twenty years ago, I snowboarded all the time. But it's a pretty expensive habit, so my husband taught me how to Nordic ski. Now I spend my weekends at Howelsen Hill going up the slope. It's sooooo hard, but incredibly rewarding. Usually half way up the hill I think, I'm never gonna' make it. But then somehow I do. I try to keep this in mind when I'm writing; it often seems completely impossible, but like skiing, or biking, or hiking, if I just keep chugging along, eventually I get there. Can you tell, I'm on the scenic route to a career, but, what the hell, the scenery is pretty spectacular!
Yes, everyone should take the scenic route to their career! lol. What a lovely world it would be. I wish you a heavenly winding road.
Thank you so much!
Anyone has signed up? If so what are your feelings about the contest?
@Alle, sometimes i wonder when the ability to just reach out freely would return. Seems that just to say hi my logline is xxxx to a producer costs the value of a pitch session.
Hey Stuart, thanks for the words of wisdom! I think you're right, even if you don't win, at least somebody will have read your script. Somebody once said to me, "If nobody ever reads your script, it's...
Expand commentHey Stuart, thanks for the words of wisdom! I think you're right, even if you don't win, at least somebody will have read your script. Somebody once said to me, "If nobody ever reads your script, it's just a journal entry." I often submit script to the Page Awards because for a little extra money they'll send you a full review of your script and why they passed on it--super helpful!
Micheal, though your question as to genre seems to make s sense, it's missing the fundamentals about what a spec script is for. I'd say (unscientifically) that most new writers don't understand the ba...
Expand commentMicheal, though your question as to genre seems to make s sense, it's missing the fundamentals about what a spec script is for. I'd say (unscientifically) that most new writers don't understand the basic premise behind a spec script. It's not to sell or option that script to make a bazillion bucks. It's an advertisement for you, the writer. It's an example of your prowess in screenwriting. When you have enough spec scripts, then people will (hopefully) begin optioning and buying your spec scripts. 99 times out a 100, after hearing your pitch, a producer will say, "What else do you have?" It's all about odds, being in the right place at the right time with the right subject a produce wants to make. The more specs you have out there, the better your chances. I don't expect anyone in the current state of Hollywood filmmaking to make my period piece starring children, but it's a damn good calling card. Aimee, thank you! Contest are only one way to get your work out there. I use them now to pin to my resume which increases my chances of being read when I submit somewhere. You never know where or when someone will ask for your script. It's mostly serendipity, but serendipity can be helped along. I was in China last year working on John Woo's new film when they found out I was a screenwriter. I pitched them a few ideas, and they ended up buying the very first script I ever wrote...28 years ago!
I'm working on a short script based on a comic book series I've written. I think it would be great for animation, should I approach it any differently than I would for a live action script?
The short of it is, no, a good story is a good story regardless of the tools used to depict it. Before vfx became the advanced state it is, the rule of thumb was that certain worlds lent themselves to...
Expand commentThe short of it is, no, a good story is a good story regardless of the tools used to depict it. Before vfx became the advanced state it is, the rule of thumb was that certain worlds lent themselves to animation because the fx would be too cost prohibitive but one just has to look at the flood of Marvel films to realize that is no longer the case. Certainly, animation is more expensive so a straight up character film only makes good business sense to do it with pure live action. Be on the lookout for a new script tool call comixwriter (comixwriter.com) unlike final draft, it will enable you to put boards in your script -- should launch later this year.
Thanks you guys, that's very helpful!
Hey Lyse, I know, screenplays are hard to sell, and animation is REALLY hard to sell. Evidently I'm a glutton for punishment! I would love to produce it myself, but I don't think I have the means and...
Expand commentHey Lyse, I know, screenplays are hard to sell, and animation is REALLY hard to sell. Evidently I'm a glutton for punishment! I would love to produce it myself, but I don't think I have the means and skills to it alone. But you comment makes me think, perhaps I should think about what happens after it's finished...
We use cookies to ensure that we give you the best experience on our website. By using this site, you are accepting our cookie policy