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BOTTOM FEEDERS
By Lisa Clemens
A teen does a “one time only” job for a disorganized street gang to earn fast cash and finds himself becoming the new favorite of the dangerous gang leader, making another member so jealous that he frames the teen for murder.
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This sounds like a fun project:)
Intriguing plot! I am very interested in knowing how it plays out.
Lisa - as a rule of thumb, loglines should not contain character names. The last line also belongs in a synopsis.
Lisa, cool idea - I really like how universal it is in terms of time and place. This could literally happen anytime, anywhere.
Lisa, I like the concept - what stage are you at with the script?