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BABEL VACATION
By Debbie Croysdale
Nature loving honeymooners find themselves lost in rural Spain and stumble across an eco hub of polythene greenhouses, approaching the dwellers to purchase fresh fruit, they become enslaved for a ritualistic tradition in a secret society.
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What kind of tourists? What one word sum them up as a whole? Give a little more flavor for the group we're gonna root for, Deb... other than that, I like it.
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Hey Brian KUDOS.....Been writing all night so missed the error you spotted. I changed the word tourists. I should not put stuff out when I'm tired. Have a great weekend!
Much better Debbie
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