While vacationing in a stranded cottage, a young couple witness a devastating car accident whose participant might be better off left alive than dead...
Hello Kiril. The logline is good. Two things though, you can remove the 'to' after 'witness', and I don't really think the three dots after 'accident' and in the end of the sentence are necessary.
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Hello Kiril. The logline is good. Two things though, you can remove the 'to' after 'witness', and I don't really think the three dots after 'accident' and in the end of the sentence are necessary.
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You have the start of a scary movie, Kiril Maksimoski.
Here are two loglines (the first is one sentence, and the second is two sentences):
"After a young couple witnesses a devastating car accident while on vacation, they ________ (goal of story) so ________ (stakes)."
"While vacationing in a stranded cottage, a young couple witnesses a devastating car accident. ________ (goal of story) so ________ (stakes)."
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Suspenseful, spine-chilling. Hopefully, you can make the screenplay available in the future.