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An Evil Alien travels to Earth to Destroy it and capture Humans with only Type O Blood to create a Hybrid Human race that Dorex the Evil One can control to carry out his dastardly deeds. Jason and his team of Astronauts must kill Dorex before he leaps through a Void ( Black Hole ) to escape capture and/or death.
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The " War to Save the Universe "!
NOW NDA!
I think this has potential for lots of fun - comedy and drama... but the log line is confusing as it stands... I could quite get a grasp on what's important.