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A declining Oregon town begins to confront its guilty secrets when stranger on a mission drives into town.
EXT. THE DEER LEAP INN - SUMMER - DAY
FRONT LAWN
Over Black; "Norman Ridge, Oregon. 1954." There is the
sound of pleasant outdoor conversation, the tink of forks
and the clink of dinnerware.
FADE IN on The Deer Leap Inn, the outdoor terrace. It's a
resort hotel with high toned, outdoorsy people. The scene
is cheery.
At the best table are JAMES and MARGE HUFFSTODT. Marge is
21 and plain. James, 30, is holding court. Douchebag is the
only word to describe him. At the table are HERBERT and
NORA STOCKHAUSEN, old money if there ever was any.
JAMES
And so the Polock suspect steps
forward and screamed "That's her!!"
His laughs is like hearing puppies being ground up in a
blender.
JAMES (CONT'D)
So Mr. Stockhausen, about this-
HERBERT
Later...
Nora jumps in with interference.
NORA
You must have been a beautiful
bride!
Marge smiles.
MARGE
Thanks, Ma'am. IJAMES
She better be, with how much her
dress cost.
Marge shifts in her chair.
HERBERT
But I bet it was worth every penny.
JAMES
Who was it who did your dress, hon?
The one you had to have instead of
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a house?
JAMES (CONT'D)
NORA
Hah! Money...
MARGE
Charles James.
Nora nods approvingly.
MARGE (CONT'D)
It had a skirt so big it could
barely fit through the door.
JAMES
Yes, sugar pie. It was the skirt.
Marge sets her drink down a little sharply, making them all
jump.
THE FIRST FLOOR - AN HOUR LATER
Marge and James are walking towards the door. They are
wearing their best whites and carrying rackets. Marge looks
as if she's been crying.
JAMES
...and you gotta make more of an
impression. These are the friends
we want.
MARGE
...they already are my friends.
JAMES
Or why don't you introduce me as
your "common as dirt husband"?
Dammit, just because you inherited
your money doesn't mean other
people don't have to work for
theirs.
MARGE
...sorry...
JAMES
...yeah, while you're gonna be if
you don't perk up a little. And if
mention Mutual Securities, I will
break that widening ass of yours
again.
She looks around, embarrassed and ashamed, as she follows
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him outside.
OUTSIDE HOTEL - CONTINUOUS
James's demeanor changes on a dime, and brightens the moment
he sees as he sees the Stockhausens.
JAMES
The Patricks are here to lose at
tennis!
NORA
Aw, you!
HERBERT
You will, but only by virtue of the
fact that I've been practicing
longer than you've been alive.
Nora, no fool she, kisses Marge on the cheek and leds her
behind the men.
JAMES
Speaking of winning, I was
wondering if I could mention this
opportunity I've just come across.
His voice fades as Nora leans in towards Marge, who's far,
far away.
NORA
(Low)
You hold the keys to the kingdom,
and he knows it. Remind him from
time to time.
Marge looks at her questioningly, and Nora nods.
NORA (CONT'D)
Think about it.
EXT. TENNIS COURTS
James, who wouldn't know subtlety if it bit him on the ass,
continues to talk. There is a distant sound which seems to
get louder.
JAMES
...and so, with rates returning at
over thirty percent-
HERBERT
First rule of business, save it for
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another time than your honeymoon.
HERBERT (CONT'D)
JAMES
But...
Nora takes her racket out.
NORA
Girls versus boys?
MARGE
Oh, I'm sure I'll lose, but-
JAMES
(Meaning "shut up!")
Marge!
Nora and Herbert look at James, surprised.
JAMES (CONT'D)
I'm sorry, I don't mean to be rude,
but this is a -
Nora sees something in the air. Herbert follows her gaze,
but it's too late to do anything.
JAMES (CONT'D)
A great opportunity for everyone to
get what they des-
But it's too late. The sound a skydiver who's fallen to
earth. On James. There is a sickening crunch and a healthy
spray of blood. Marge starts to scream at the top of her
lungs as the camera cuts to black.
Roll opening credits, a "light vs. dark" montage. The
uncomfortable truths of what might go on behind closed doors
of a small mountain town.
SIGHTSEEING VIDEO - 1962
A scratchy, super 8 looking tourism film for Norman Ridge.
It's after the films we all watched in grade school). It
starts with Slocum Street in better days.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
Welcome to Norman Ridge! It's a
quiet little mountain town.
A group shot of waving citizens in front of Hopper's
Restaurant.
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NARRATOR (V.O) (CONT'D)
We're happy to have you. Take some
time out of your busy schedules and
enjoy a peaceful vacation here.
A cheery tracking shot of well kept houses.
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT'D)
Row after row of quaintold houses,a
gorgeous landscape, and a pond on
which you can row, fish or swim the
day away.
A shot of Carver Pond, where a happy, white bread family is
having a picnic.
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT'D)
Why not check into The Deer Leap
Inn, where they'll cater to your
every whim with vim, vigor and
vitality?
The Deer Leap Inn in better days.
The Narrator, a handsome older man, is standing at the end
of Slocum Street.
NARRATOR (CONT'D)
From friendly people who welcome
you with open arms, to clean and
honest living, Norman Ridge will
charm you with its old fashioned
values.
Pan out to crane shot of street.
NARRATOR (CONT'D)
Your time here will be pleasant and
your memories will last forever.
So come to Norman Ridge today!!!
The audio goes wonky and the video plays out.
EXT . HIGHWAY 38 - MORNING
OVER BLACK - "TODAY"
A slightly out of date car moving east into The Cascades.
The river looks large and cold. It's morning, and the mood
is blue and stark.
ADAM HATFIELD is driving. Adam is 38, terribly underweight,
and looks like he hasn't slept in days. He might have been
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a winner once. Now he just looks lost.
There is an iPhone in the passenger's seat, on top of a
hastily packed bag. It says "42 missed calls"
THERAPIST (O.S)
Are you mad at her?
INT . THERAPIST'S OFFICE - DAY
Adam is sitting in a therapist's office. He is sitting
ramrod straight on the couch. The therapist looks concerned.
ADAM
Why would I be mad?
THERAPIST
It would be a normal, completely
understandable, even expected. It's
stage two.
ADAM
Maybe I'm behind schedule.
THERAPIST
Then where is "Adam" today? How do
we get him back?
Adam thinks.
ADAM
He's at peace with it. It's just
the way that life is.
THERAPIST
For who?
Adam smiles bitterly.
EXT . 3RD AND PINE STREETS - DAY
A busy day in front of Macy's. The scene is in a very
dreamlike slow motion.
Rebecca, a very handsome woman (think Chloe Sevigny), is
arguing with someone on the street we can't see. She
carries a shopping bag.
THERAPIST (O.S.)
What way is life for you?
ADAM (O.S.)
You know, there's people who get
what they want thrown at them.
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People toss roses in from them
ADAM (O.S.) (CONT'D)
wherever they go.
Rebecca pulls away from the other person, looking agitated.
THERAPIST (O.S.)
And you?
ADAM (O.S.)
I get to settle for things. I have
to be happy with scraps, leavings
of things other people don't want
for themselves.
(Pause)
But it was okay when I had Bec.
THERAPIST (O.S.)
How so?
ADAM (O.S)
If I had her, it didn't matter that
I didn't have anything else.
The screen splits. On one side is Rebecca. The other screen
is the cross town bus. Rebecca is trying very hard to stay
calm.
THERAPIST (O.S.)
It sounds like you feel let down.
INT. THERAPIST'S OFFICE - CONTINUOUS
The scene continues as before. Adam is still smiling.
ADAM
You can't feel let down if you
never expected much.
THERAPIST
Can you explain what you mean by
that?
(Adam is silent, shrugs)
Adam, you've said before that you
feel you've spent your time being
strong for others. Who's strong for
you?
(Pause)
Your brother?
Adam laughs.
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ADAM
Sorry, it's just -
(Laughs again)
If you only knew him! He's learning
that being there for another person
is a thing.
THERAPIST
Some family members don't even
engage. Do you feel he's making an
effort?
ADAM
Yes, because his type A wife told
him he had to. She's Southern -
apparently togetherness in times of
crisis is a tradition there.
THERAPIST
How about friends? Co-workers?
ADAM
(Miserably)
When you want to be happy, you
avoid unhappy people. I'd avoid me.
Insert - Rebecca eithers falls or is pushed in front of the
bus. POV Rebecca, as the bus runs her over.
Adam recoils, and put his head in his hands.
INT. HIGHWAY 38 - CONTINUOUS
Adam watches as his iPhone light up again. The display reads
"LUKE" and the picture is of a younger man, 34 maybe. He
looks very satisfied with himself.
Adam rejects the call, then calls up some saved pages on his
phone.
There is a newspaper headline from the 1980's which reads
"Oregon Town Celebrates 100 years." Another page reads
"Local Family Once Again Rocked by Tragedy."
The phone rings again. It's Luke again. Matter of factly,
he opens the window and tosses the phone out.
EXT. NORMAN RIDGE - 90 MINUTES LATER
Aerial shot of Norman Ridge - it's a small town some miles
from the highway, sitting in the lowest part of a valley.
A large ridge encircles the area on the opposite side from
the highway. To the east, a large crag of rock known as
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Deer Leap.
PAN down to Adam's Car.
ADAM'S CAR
He passes a cheery looking sign in 1950's script "Welcome to
Norman Ridge - Come in and Stay Awhile!" It's then that he
hears a horn behind him. It's a very ancient looking truck
with a gun rack in back. Behind the wheel is the as yet
unintroduced DWAYNE KENNY.
DWAYNE is 22, and bad news. He looks very mad, and only
looks at Adam long enough to give him the finger.
DWAYNE'S TRUCK
Dwayne is drumming his fists on the steering wheel.
DWAYNE
...goddam motherfucker...
HE LOOKS AT SOMETHING IN THE PASSENGER SEAT WE CAN'T SEE.
DWAYNE (CONT'D)
...fuckin' pervert...
The truck speeds into our first view of Norman Ridge,
Oregon.
TS of truck as it makes its way into town. It passes modest
brick and wooden buildings, most of them from around the
turn of the century. They are lovingly restored and well
kept. It passes Slocum Street, which can be considered the
"Main Street" of Norman Ridge.
On the other side of the road is a set of railroad tracks,
and a picturesque mill which reads "Carver Park and Historic
Mill."
Just before Dwayne makes a right onto the next street, he
nearly plows into ABBY NITTLER. Abby is 17 and startlingly
pretty.
ABBY
Watch where you're going, asshole!
She is surpised at her own outburst, and puts her head down,
walking on in case someone should notice. She seems to be
preparing herself for something.
She crosses back to her car (a nice car for a girl her age)
and gets in.
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INT. ABBY'S CAR
Abby pulls out her phone, takes a breath, and dials.
ABBY (CONT'D)
...Yeah, it's me.
(Listens)
...chill, okay? It's taken care
of.
(Listens)
It's gonna be okay, but we gotta
talk.
(Listens)
Nothin's happened yet!
(Listens)
Okay...
She hangs the phone up, takes a breath, then fires up the
engine, backing out.
ABBY (CONT'D)
Bitch.
EXT. SLOCUM STREET
Abby starts to pull out and nearly hits MARK REYNAUD, 19.
Mark is a scrappy young man with a quick wit, handsome as
hell.
MARK
Thanks. Take a leg. I got two!
Abby peels away. Mark continues towards Slocum Street. It is
a quaint but run down street. Hopper's, a picturesque
restaurant, is on the left, The Beauty Box is on the right.
Mark looks over as Adam's car passes him.
INSERT; The scene is being watched on camera.
TECHNICIAN
Focus area two...
(Pause)
Run license plate BQZ 734.
The camera follows Mark as he walks into Hopper's.
HOPPER'S RESTAURANT
It's a beautiful restaurant made from an old drug store.
It's a little shabby, as if business has been bad awhile.
MARGIE VAN ALDEN, 60's, sees Mark and nods at a the counter.
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MARGIE
Mornin', Mark!
MARK
Morning, Margie! You're looking
VERY today.
MARGIE
If I didn't know your heart was in
the right place, I'd call you a
smartass.
The waitress holds up a box for him.
WAITRESS
Pipin' hot, just how she likes it!
MARK
Hope so, or the bitch will send me
back at to the rabble.
MARGIE
Mark!
(Pause)
Stop being perceptive.
They all share a laugh. The waitress looks at him, making
Mark suddenly bashful.
WAITRESS
How very do I look today, sweetie?
MARK
Oh so very.
He kisses her on the cheek and runs out the door, laughing.
The camera rolls in TS with him.
SLOCUM STREET
Mark is still smiling when he sees the as yet unintroduced
KIRK BALDWIN. Kirk, an older man in his 50's, is watching
Mark with a disapproving stare. When Mark sees him, his
smile disappears.
MARK (CONT'D)
Kirk.
KIRK
Mark.
Kirk looks like he's going to say more, but Mark keeps
walking. Eventually, so does Kirk.
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He walks into Sew Pefect, and the camera follows him in.
SEW PERFECT
A somewhat nicely kept sewing shop.
Three women are giggling like schoolgirls at the register.
They are RUTH REYNAUD, mid 40's and acting like she's
eighteen, and her co-workers TARA and CINDY, same ages.
MARK
Your breakfast!
Ruth turns around and gives him a radiant smile.
RUTH
There's my big man!
He hands her the box.
MARK
Right on time!
RUTH
For once.
Tara and Cindy exchange a look. Ruth opens the box and picks
at the food with her fingers.
RUTH (CONT'D)
And what do you know, they got it
right!
Tara sizes Mark up.
TARA
How's it going, Marky?
MARK
Just fine, Tara. How about you?
RUTH
(To Tara)
Don't.
Cindy laughs and disappears in the back.
TARA
We were just talking about you!
MARK
(Looking at Ruth)
I'm sure that must have been a
happy conversation!
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Ruth is not embarrassed at all.
RUTH
We were just talking about you
going to summer school.
Mark is embarrassed instead.
MARK
Hey, it happens.
TARA
Don't be upset Mark, one summer's
not the end of the world.
Ruth is eyeing Mark like a lion tracking a wounded gazelle.
RUTH
Yep, a nineteen year old boy still
in high school when all his friends
are graduated and done - yeah,
that's perfect.
Mark thinks, and smiles.
MARK
At least I'M GONNA GRADUATE.
Ruth is suddenly angry. She picks up a piece of paper poking
out of her purse.
RUTH
Go get everything on this list, and
then get the laundry started. The
crock pot will be done by six, and
you better have some salad ready
when it is.
He takes the piece of paper, and turns to leave.
MARK
Have fun today, Ruth. I hope you
find your youth again!
Ruth, outraged, watches as Mark walks outside again.
SLOCUM STREET
He walks out of the shop and across the street. On the
street is the as-yet-unintroduced KATE HITCHCOCK, 30's.
She is watching the parking lot of The Chatterbox, an
average little diner you'd find in a thousand small towns
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everywhere.
In the parking lot, Adam is getting out of his car and is
looking around. If he sees Kate, he doesn't show it. He goes
inside.
INT. THE CHATTERBOX - CONTINUOUS
Adam walks in. It's an old diner just like any diner you'd
find in a small town - well kept, but past it's prime. Duct
tape on the upholstery. Stained and scratched formica.
A regular assortment of small town people inside, some young
but mostly old. There is a radio playing gospel hymns in the
back.
MICHELLE, a waitress of about 35, seems way to happy about
her job.
MICHELLE
Blueberry.
Adam looks around. The trade is light, but there's something
off. Everyone is eating but no one is acknowledging each
other.
ADAM
Blueberry?
MICHELLE
Best damn blueberry pancakes in the
state. You look like a blueberry
pancake would do you a world of
good right now.
ADAM
I think you'd be right!
She giggles and points to a booth.
MICHELLE
I haven't been wrong today! How
about we get you started right over
there, hon?
He sits at the booth as she deals him his cup of coffee,
leaning over a little more than necessary to see her good
rack.
ADAM
I don't think I want coffee.
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MICHELLE
No...coffee?
ADAM
Naw...thanks, though. Got any tea?
MICHELLE
Yeah, I guess...
(Picks up cup)
Whatever you want, we're serving it
up hot as you like today.
Adam is out of it but not out of it enough to miss her tone.
He watches her go with the look of a hungry lion. He
glances out the window, and stops.
Outside, Rebecca Hatfield is walking down the street. She
carries a carrier bag from Macys.
Michelle returns with a teapot and a basket of teas.
MICHELLE (CONT'D)
...Kayso, we got pekoe, Earl Grey,
and black. Got a preference?
Adam looks up at her.
ADAM
...uh, surprise me.
MICHELLE
...black? Mister, you don't look
so good.
ADAM
Maybe it's because I'm hungry?
She smiles.
MICHELLE
Sure, why don't I get your order
in? We got the pancakes, but we
also got some crispy bacon and some
hash browns. How about I fix you
up?
He's distracted by her breasts. She grabs his hand.
MICHELLE (CONT'D)
My name's Michelle, but the way.
He snaps out of it.
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ADAM
Oh...sorry! I'm Adam-Adam.
MICHELLE
It's nice to meet you, Adam Adam.
(She laughs) )
And don't be sorry. How would I
know if they're still good if I
can't get a man to stare at them
once in awhile?
She goes to put in his order while he looks down, away from
the window.
INT. LAIRD'S HOUSE - AT THE SAME TIME
A small duplex on a Ridge Road. It's very depressing and
somewhat removed from the road. Norman Ridge can be seen in
the distance.
LAIRD TAYLOR, 27, fat and pathetic, takes a look out the
window as Dwayne's truck pulls up. His eyes widen.
LAIRD
Holy shit.
He's very nervous. He looks around for something to save him
from the angry young man walking up to his door, but manages
to calm himself down.
LAIRD (CONT'D)
(To himself)
Just be cool.
There's pounding on the door.
DWAYNE (O.S.)
You in there, Lard?
The words are like a dagger in his soul. He takes a minute
and then opens the door.
LAIRD
What the hell do you-
But he can't say anymore, because Dwayne punches him in the
face. He falls back, stunned. Then the blood starts pouring
out his nose, and he starts to get up.
DWAYNE
(CALMLY)
How are you, Laird J. Taylor? Just
thought I'd come by and say hello.
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BTW you might want to stay down.
DWAYNE (CONT'D)
He steps in coldly. There is something in his other hand.
LAIRD
Have you gone crazy? I didn't-
He's interupted by a boot in the stomach. The camera pans
out the door as Dwayne slams it shut. There is the sound of
a beating on the other side, but eventually, the farther the
camera gets, the sound fades and it's just a grey morning in
the mountains.
INT. THE CHATTERBOX - A FEW MINUTES LATER
THE BOOTHS
Adam is drinking his tea over his untouched breakfast,
avoiding looking out the window.
POV MARY ELLEN; Adam is seen from behind. A small hand
reaches out and touches his shoulder.
Adam starts and looks out the window first, then at his
visitor. MARY ELLEN WARREN is a small, heavy woman of about
sixty, with chapped hands and a weathered face. She holds up
her hands.
MARY ELLEN
I mean no harm.
Adam get up.
ADAM
No one ever does. Thanks for
showing up Mrs. Warren - can I call
you Mary?
Mary Ellen just nods and perches, rather than sits, in the
booth opposite Adam. She is very aware of her surroundings.
She looks at his plate.
MARY ELLEN
I've always been Mary Ellen, and
it's not a matter. I knew you'd
show no matter that I did.
(Looks at his plate)
Not eating?
ADAM
No.
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MARY ELLEN
You need your strength, Mr.
Hatfield.
He looks at his plate.
ADAM
If you're Mary, I'm Adam.
MARY ELLEN
I'm not comfortable with that.
ADAM
(Pause)
Fair enough. But I don't want to
eat. I want to talk.
MARY ELLEN
You starving yourself won't change
nothing. If you don't do it for
you, indulge an old mother.
He doesn't move.
MARY ELLEN (CONT'D)
What if I told you I won't tell you
what you wanna know until you take
a couple bites?
He chuckles.
ADAM
What am I, five?
MARY ELLEN
I don't know, but actin' like
you're five won't bring her back.
She picks up a piece of bacon. Adam, when he realizes that
it's not a request but a command, takes a piece of bacon and
pops it in.
KITCHEN
BEN, the cook, is paying absolutely no attention to the
food, and watches Michelle, as she goes through Adam's
wallet. She reads his license, examines his credit cards,
and then finds a snap of Rebecca. Her eyebrows raise.
Ben turns back to the food while Michelle dials the phone in
the back. She whispers into it.
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MICHELLE
Confirm Adam Hatfield, DOB 8/11/77,
6'2, brown and blue, address 428
Bellingham Avenue...
THE BOOTHS
Mary Ellen is examining Adam. He eats slowly.
MARY ELLEN
(Low)
I told you not to come here. I
begged you, even. There's nothing
for you here.
ADAM
There's nothing for me anywhere.
She closes her eyes, then begins to pull a few photos from
her purse.
MARY ELLEN
I'm sorry about that, but it's not
going to get better by being here.
ADAM
I don't have anywhere else to go.
MARY ELLEN
We've all got sorrows, Adam.
Believe me.
ADAM
Then why not talk to me? What's the
big fuckin' deal?
She slaps him across the face.
MARY ELLEN
LANGUAGE!
Adam looks around (no one's watching), and at her as if to
say "Did that just happen?" But the look on her face makes
him sorry.
ADAM
Sorry, Ma'am.
MARY ELLEN
I will give you something that will
hold you one one condition. Get in
your car and drive away.
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She pushes an envelope to him, which he opens to her
objections.
There is an assortment of photos. It's the early life of a
little girl, 80's and 80's. She is almost heartbreakingly
endearing in them.
MARY ELLEN
You were supposed to leave first.
ADAM
(Ignoring statement)
What the hell?
MARY ELLEN
Meet Susanna Linden Ballard, who
you knew as Rebecca. I knew her
from the day she was born.
Adam can only stare.
INT . LAWYER'S OFFICE - DAY
OVER BLACK - The sound of pen drumming on a desk. CAPTION :
"Two Months Earlier." We hear RACHEL BERKMAN'S flinty voice.
RACHEL
I know this is a horrible time, and
if there were any way I could avoid
this, I would have taken it.
Adam, dressed in a suit, sits across from Rachel. She is not
maternal, supportive or evern empathetic looking. She looks
like she'd rather not be there.
ADAM
Thanks, I could feel your concern
the moment I walked in.
Rachel, who felt the shot right between the eyes, grimaces.
RACHEL
Adam, is there anyone you'd like me
to call, or?...
ADAM
No.
Rachel puts her briefcase down on the table.
RACHEL
Then I guess I better get started.
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She pulls out a file and hesitates.
ADAM
If I'm here because you want me to
sue the transit authority, I can't
think about that right now.
RACHEL
I only wish that's why I was here.
She gives him the file.
ADAM
That's comforting.
He opens the file. In it, there is a picture of a younger
Rebecca. It's clipped to a birth certificate.
RACHEL
Pursuant to legal will of William
Ballard, it's my duty to inform you
that the woman known as Rebecca
Jane Greenwood was born Susanna
Linden Ballard in Bend, Oregon.
Adam sits up straight.
ADAM
...that's not possible.
RACHEL
I'm sorry to be the one who has to
tell you this - it was thought that
a woman could better deliver this
news - but it's true.
Rachel doesn't speak. He starts to cry.
RACHEL (CONT'D)
There's more.
INT. THE CHATTERBOX - A FEW MINUTES LATER
Adam is looking at the photos, and had lost all interest in
his meal again. Mary Ellen looks uncomfortable.
ADAM
She can't be more than eight or ten
here.
Mary Ellen looks at the photo.
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MARY ELLEN
Seems about right.
ADAM
Was she happy?
MARY ELLEN
Who can answer that question? Some
little girls can spin a yarn so
good, even they believe it.
INSERT; Rebecca across the table (on a date?), POV ADAM.
There is no sound, and the caption reads; "I've never been
to Oregon."
Adam looks at a picture of Rebecca with a little boy.
Written on back is "Suzanna and Bart - Siblings getting
along?! Yay! 1991.
ADAM
Tell me about it.
INSERT; Rebecca again across the table, POV ADAM. This
time, the caption reads, "I'm an only child."
ADAM
So where do we begin? Tell me
everything.
Mary Ellen gathers herself.
MARY ELLEN
We don't.
ADAM
No, you're not doing that. You
can't bait me and then throw me
back.
MARY ELLEN
It's not-
Michelle comes walking towards Adam from across the room, a
strange look on her face. Mary Ellen notices her.
MARY ELLEN
I wish I'd never answered the
phone.
Michelle looks to the floor and bends down, then straightens
up, brightening.
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MICHELLE
'Scuse me, but I think you dropped
your wallet.
Mary Ellen stares at her.
MARY ELLEN
...sure.
They exchange a quick hostile look with one another while
Adam grabs his wallet.
ADAM
God, that was careless. Thanks.
Mary Ellen keeps her eyes on Michelle, who shows no sign of
leaving.
MARY ELLEN
We're fine, hon.
Michelle, not happy, moves along.
MARY ELLEN (CONT'D)
Say hi to your husband!
Adam keeps his eyes on Mary Ellen.
ADAM
She didn't even ask for your order!
Mary Ellen bristles.
MARY ELLEN
No matter.
(Pause)
Adam, you had a life together, and
your loved each other? Right?
Adam thinks.
ADAM
That's not the point, IMARY
ELLEN
It was real for you, therefore it
was real. You have to make due with
that, think about that when you
feel alone at night.
(Shoves the photes at
him)
Go home.
24
ADAM
You're supposed to help me.
She puts her hands on his.
MARY ELLEN
I am helping you.
ADAM
I did NOT come all this way to get
blown off, lady. You like paying
with people?
MARY ELLEN
(Getting up)
It's won't be who'll doing the
playing. I'm sorry for your loss.
ADAM
Wait!
POV ADAM; He gets up to go after her, but his vision gets
blurry. She walks out the door right before he passes out.
END ACT ONE.