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A couple of city dwellers move to the suburbs and are bombarded by their hyperactive neighbors who aggressively try to get them to try a strange, new health product.
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Bonnie and Chandler Fide are eager to fit in after moving into their new house at the end of a cul-de-sac. The neighborhood is clean. The air is fresh. Everything is oddly perfect even if speed walking/talking, nosy people with weird patches on their arms who are always chowing down on protein bars, are their new neighbors, and want them to go to a party. Chandler thinks it's a pyramid scheme. Bonnie thinks the bars taste like trash, but they agree to go if they don't purchase anything. But, before arriving, Chandler ends up scarfing down a whole sample bar while wearing the patch and goes into full spaz mode as the party devolves into a strangely charged game of Twister, prompting Bonnie to leave and stumble upon the horrifying main ingredient that has been giving everyone so much energy.
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What "kind" of couple of city dwellers are they? Adjective please! They're your protags (I assume); describe them.
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