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A depressed young man struggles to keep up with his girlfriend who keeps disappearing at the most inopportune times.
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Johnny awakens troubled that his girlfriend, Mabel has, once again, been strikingly absent from his dreams. His concern grows when he realizes it’s still dark outside and that he’s lost track of time. Then, she just disappears, leaving the shower running empty and causing him to answer doorbells that lead to nothing. When she eventually shows back up, seemingly regretful, covered in vomit, and in desperate need of medical attention, he forgives her. He even forgets. But, when she vanishes again in a diner bathroom, Johnny’s meltdown in the parking lot becomes so devastating that the employees know they must reveal the true reason why Mabel has been so in and out of his life lately.
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