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SYNOPSIS:
Beth loves Valentines Day above any other day of the year. Living above and owning a gift shop is her life. She took over the shop when her Nana died and loves every moment. One major problem is making her life difficult and his name is Mr. Roberts. He is the agent assigned to try to talk her into selling her property. It is the last original home on a modernized street in San Francisco. After the teaser scene were we get a true feel of who Beth is the movie opens on February 1st of 20—and follows Beth and those who come into her store thru the 13 days before Valentines Day. Beth loves the people who come into her little shop. There’s the young girl who comes in to buy something for her boyfriend and walks out with twice as much as she had money for. There’s the couple that Beth helps make a renewed connection with each other. Ryan who comes in on February 1st to get something for a woman he just met and then continues to come in every day after to buy something, anything it would seem. Her favorite most faithful costumer Mr. Bradey is the cutest little man you could meet. He comes in every year to get chocolates and tulips for his wife. Beth loves the ones who work for her even more. She would be lost without her sister Kathy to help her…well that is when Kathy feels like it. Kathy is a bit of a free spirit. Eric is the odd duck in the shop, dark rocker who loves where he’s working. He’s a closet romantic that doesn’t look the part. Between singing Bears, singing Monkeys, and White Lilacs in February Beth helps to make Valentines Day perfect for everyone. By a twist of fate she may just find love for herself. She gives of herself and of her shop to help others find love.
This is a full feature screenplay that has been registered with the WGAw. It has been received by 4 different companies but sadly no one has optioned it as of yet.
If you'd like to read this script I have it up at Talentville right here http://www.talentville.com/screenplay/2093 head on over and let me know what you think.
Hi Becca I get the background, and the characters, and the world you've created. But what's the incident that starts the story off, and what is the story?
The incident that starts the story off is showing how even thou she has little mishaps at the shop her biggest problem is the company who is trying to buy her out. The story is about the people she helps find love, keep love, and repair love while she tries not to loose her shop.