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BLACK SALT MINIFEATURE

BLACK SALT MINIFEATURE
By Owen Ratliff

GENRE: Action, Thriller
LOGLINE:

With time winding down towards world-ending devastation, the fate of mankind rests in the hands of an Interpol agent.

SYNOPSIS:

With only four days left the clock ticks down towards a new world holocaust. The only thing standing in its path is Interpol’s deadliest black-ops agent, Samuel Tharpe.Sam hunts down the path of a game-changing weapon of mass destruction called the Exterminatus.He follows hot on its trail deep into the ancient land of China where he must seek aid from the Abbot at the Shaolin Temple. An evil Yakuza master stole the Exterminatus and seeks to use it in the Far East. Sam must prove his worthiness by fighting one of the Temple’s most skilled monks. Prepared to lay down his own life in exchange for the lives of his family and the world, Sam steps forward and engages in combat. Only his long-past training by the Shaolin master, Yu Bai Shek will make him a worthy hero.

Donnalyn Vojta

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Donnalyn Vojta

Hi, Owen. Unless people already know who Sam Tharpe is and what makes him an interesting choice for saving the world, you need to describe who he is... just an adjective and an obstacle he faces in saving the world will do. And don't use his proper name (unless he's a famous hero already). Best of luck!

Tasha Lewis

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Owen Ratliff

Thanks Donnalyn I will make that change.

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