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The dead have some unusual tales to tell!
SYNOPSIS:
A Body reveals more about a relationship than Alice (protag)
EXT. Forest - day
ALICE, mid 20s,
Alice discovers body of female friend she know several yrs ago, CLARE, late 20s,
EXT.
Flashback:
Clare and Alice, in a quiet cafe style room.
clare
You know I did really fancy him,
(feminine attitude)
alice
I know, you really want to ...
clare
you've hsd dreams before?
ALICE
Just stop with the cork and bottle routine.
alice
(O.S)
Maybe god took her soul, because of those freeflowing thoughts of hers.
EXT. Forest - day
Alice gets out her mobile and starts dialing.
alice
Hello, I'd like to report a murder .... female body in the wood ....