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CORNERED.
By John D Clay
SYNOPSIS:
a concept based on discourse from Euroscript writing Horror workshop. Genre, character and primal themes.
CORNERED.
a female hunter faces a male antagonist,does she have a strength reverse the situation and escape a primal world go from Prey to hunter. open - Act I backwards ActI - II Forwards Act II - III Backwards (linearity)
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Working on outline after script development - clarifying location, qualities of characters and the flow of the narrative. working out answers to alot of questions.
running through a dark forest, The hunter is frantic as she as heads for a cabin. Can she escape before her male Group antagonist catch her?
https://shootingpeople.org/production/work/cast/role/32790
aiming for 85 pages around average length, good character journey and something that can visually engaging.
planning opening sequence visual and intensive ....
Returning to Character outline 2 -3 pages worth.
Casting underway --- https://shootingpeople.org/production/work/project/12223
Exploring female psychology - through fear (voiceover example - you're a piece of meat, something thats eaten nothing more, prey an object that is eaten it has to escape that is me.)
would go for RED or Arri or may the new c200 (cannon)
Opening: A DARK, BLEAK ATMOSPHERE, A SILOHUOTE OF WOMAN DARTS AROUND, THE cHOES OF THE ENVIROMENT SINKS IN. MARY IS FRANTIC RUNNING HARD AND EVENIDENTLY LOOKING BACK IN FEAR. V.O I WAS A FOUL, ITS THE ONLY COURSE OF ACTION, (INSERT ADDITIONAL DIALOGUE) HER FIGURE ZIPS THOUGH THE LANDSCAPE LIKE A BULLET IT AIIMS TO ESCAPE A THREAT SHE HAS ENCOUNTERED.