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THE BOUGH

THE BOUGH
By Nate Rymer

GENRE: Drama, Comedy
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An idealistic doctor and a high-strung prison governor clash during an experimental trial casting inmates as 'cuddlers' for premature and abandoned babies, leading to chaotic tragedy as the experiment spirals out of control. 

Emily J

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Emily J

This is a really intriguing concept! What is the tone? (or tonal comps)

Nate Rymer

Thanks Emily! Not sure on comps yet, but I envision this as a mockumentary-style concept with doses of flippant gallows humour mixed in with the humanity and chaos.

Emily J

Sounds nuts, I like it!

Elise Marenson

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Mark Giacomin

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Wendy Jones

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Wendy Jones

Why is it quarantined?

Tasha Lewis

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Nate Rymer

Hi Wendy, thanks for the rating! I had the idea of making the hospital quarantined by a viral outbreak, so it wouldn't make sense for just ordinary members of the public to be drafted for the experimental trial. I will tinker with the story mechanics on this though :)

Arthur Charpentier

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Nate Rymer

Thank you Arthur! :)

Zachariah Rosalie

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Nate Rymer

Thanks Zach, appreciate the rating :)

Dartel McRae

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Nate Rymer

Thanks Dartel! :)

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