Hello Hakim. That's a very good concept, it'll make a great movie. Just a suggestion for the logline: "After a furious top secret government security agency assassin survives ultimate death, he loses his memory to baby life and fall in the hands of his bosses."
Thanks Tasha, thanks Nate, thanks Wayne and thank Marcos, I like the suggestion and actually it brings it out, thanks a lot all of you, am done with its first draft.
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Hello Hakim. That's a very good concept, it'll make a great movie. Just a suggestion for the logline: "After a furious top secret government security agency assassin survives ultimate death, he loses his memory to baby life and fall in the hands of his bosses."
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This story sounds like a cool story
Good luck with it
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Thanks Tasha, thanks Nate, thanks Wayne and thank Marcos, I like the suggestion and actually it brings it out, thanks a lot all of you, am done with its first draft.
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Thanks Wayne