A former Marine widow and mother of four, working 3 jobs and struggling to keep her Teenage stepson on the straight and narrow is shocked with evidence that her army husband is still alive.
Hi, Louisa. How are you? How about this for a logline: "Shocked with evidence that her army husband is alive, a widowed former Marine investigates his whereabouts while working three jobs and struggling to keep her teenage stepson on the straight and narrow."
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Hi, Louisa. How are you? How about this for a logline: "Shocked with evidence that her army husband is alive, a widowed former Marine investigates his whereabouts while working three jobs and struggling to keep her teenage stepson on the straight and narrow."
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Thanks Maurice Vaughan I like your value add. I was just coming on to update this with a similar but reversed.
You're welcome, Louisa Kendrick Burton. The new logline is missing the character's goal (investigate her husband's whereabouts).
YUP! Louisa, I love this.
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