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THE CHARGE

THE CHARGE
By Louisa Kendrick Burton

GENRE: Thriller, Drama
LOGLINE:

A former Marine widow and mother of four, working 3 jobs and struggling to keep her Teenage stepson on the straight and narrow is shocked with evidence that her army husband is still alive.

Ronika Merl

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Nathaniel Baker

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Bever-leigh Holloway

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JJ Hillard

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Maurice Vaughan

Hi, Louisa. How are you? How about this for a logline: "Shocked with evidence that her army husband is alive, a widowed former Marine investigates his whereabouts while working three jobs and struggling to keep her teenage stepson on the straight and narrow."

Louisa Kendrick Burton

Thanks Maurice Vaughan I like your value add. I was just coming on to update this with a similar but reversed.

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Louisa Kendrick Burton. The new logline is missing the character's goal (investigate her husband's whereabouts).

Angela Cristantello

YUP! Louisa, I love this.

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