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COMMITTED
By John Seidman

GENRE: Comedy
LOGLINE: A commitment-phobic man joins a dating service not knowing they use extraordinary and sometimes dangerous methods to make sure their clients commit.

SYNOPSIS:

Sometimes men just need a little prodding to commit in a relationship. Like a kind word or having the breaks on their car cut. Roger Clark is a commitment-phobic. He loves Rose, his girlfriend, but when she uses the ‘M’ word, he starts to get nervous. Hurt feelings lead to a bad break up. Roger is convinced by his wild pals at work that now is the time to ‘party it up.’ He is even given the name of a dating agency. He joins, but when Jill, the client they set him up with, turns out to be very strange, Roger decides this isn’t for him. He tries to leave, but the director of the agency explains that they only deal with committed relationships and Roger must commit to Jill or suffer the consequences. When Roger refuses, the director takes revenge on him and begins the process of dismantling his life. As Roger reaches his lowest ebb, he learns the true meaning of committment.

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