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A cyborg-fairy battles a corporation to become human and save the world.
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I like it, though is it possible for the story's conflict to be narrowed down from saving the world to something more personal for the character? Her wanting to become human, I think, is enough of a hook.
Rated this logline
I like it, though is it possible for the story's conflict to be narrowed down from saving the world to something more personal for the character? Her wanting to become human, I think, is enough of a hook.