GENRE: Thriller, Action
LOGLINE:
When a former Homeland security agent learns of a planned terrorist attack on the US president-elect, he must stop the suicide-bomber -- his estranged
daughter.
This sounds thrilling, Rutger Oosterhoff! The potential dilemma! I think you have a solid logline except for "he must stop." I think you need something stronger, like "he races to stop."
I love it, Rutger! Wishing much success with this storyline. I can't wait to see it in theaters!! I wrote a similar screenplay in 2010 and entered it into the Scriptpipeline contest. It placed in the semis. It was titled, "7 hours to zero". It was about a former terrorist who the CIA released from prison to help them stop his father, a tech-wiz terrorist who installed a USB-type bomb in the President's Limo timed to explode before his inauguration.
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This sounds thrilling, Rutger Oosterhoff! The potential dilemma! I think you have a solid logline except for "he must stop." I think you need something stronger, like "he races to stop."
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Thanks for rating all! I appreciate it!!
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I love it, Rutger! Wishing much success with this storyline. I can't wait to see it in theaters!! I wrote a similar screenplay in 2010 and entered it into the Scriptpipeline contest. It placed in the semis. It was titled, "7 hours to zero". It was about a former terrorist who the CIA released from prison to help them stop his father, a tech-wiz terrorist who installed a USB-type bomb in the President's Limo timed to explode before his inauguration.
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Thanks DD, somehow screenplays about preventing the killing of an American President (elect) are fun aren't they!
Thanks Heidi!