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Recently released from the hospital after a half-hearted suicide attempt, and against the advice of his friends and therapist, a young man does everything in his power to pursue a likely-doomed relationship.
SYNOPSIS:
An LGBT themed dark comedy centered around the suicide attempt of a young man and the people it brings together.
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