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A low level thief pulls off his biggest heist ever, robbing a famous treasure hunter, however, his celebration is cut short as he's captured and offered a choice, return to a life of crime or help the adventurer find the fabled Tree of Life. As they get closer to fame and fortune, they discover a city, advanced beyond their wildest dreams, but the secrets which helped protect the city are his greatest threats to survival.
I really like the setup of this story mich, but I can not rate the logline. It is simply too long. Reads more like a short synopsis.