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MYSTERY SHOPPERS (REVISED AS OF 6/8/17)
By Arial Burnz
SYNOPSIS:
GENRE: Paranormal
This is a short film (6 min) about a disgruntled employee whose job is to collect souls for the Underworld Processing Center.
MYSTERY SHOPPERS (REVISED AS OF 6/8/17)
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Very interesting premise.
Thank you!
Very entertaining! Looking forward to see what else you have in store!