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THE FIRST SON
By David Michael Kushner

GENRE: Action, Comedy
LOGLINE:

A CIA paper-pusher banned from active duty gets one last shot to prove himself when he is hired to rescue the President’s immature, thrill-seeking son kidnapped by a terrorist organization.

THE FIRST SON

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Peter Hurd

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Peter Hurd

Very nice! I like this one. My only critique is that I don't really get the tone from this logline. Is it more action or comedy?

Brian Thomas

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Rutger Oosterhoff

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Rutger Oosterhoff

Nice!

David Michael Kushner

Thank you! It is an action comedy, in the vein of "THE OTHER GUYS" and "GET HIM TO THE GREEK"

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