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THE GAME OF CARDINAL SINS
By Qazi Fabia Hoq
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I like the idea and the title. What you need to do is describe the "group of people' in a few words.
'When a [PROTAGONIST=demologist] and his '?students?' [INCITING INCIDENT=visit a barn] to investigate the presence of supernational beings, [ANTAGONIST= it (they?) ] trap(s) them in a game that tests their patience of [OBJECTIVE=not commiting the seven deadly sins] while fighting the entity in order to get out.' Something like that but much better.
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Hello, Rutger, thank you so much for your suggestion.