could be an animation movie for next Christmas, must pitch to Netflix, is it possible to team up, I have an animation studio and I want a feature film deal, and without a great script, I cannot pitch to these executives. if I tell them I have a great Christmas story that my animation studio would like to animate, then we both get what we want. with your permission only.

Love the way the story builds and builds; very fine work, could really visualise it while reading. Best of luck with getting it filmed!

Wonderful story idea, Marty. To make the logline more vivid, you might consider naming which family member is the main antagonist.

I know I am new to this, but I thought a logline should contain an antagonist, protagonist, goal soem sort of inciting incident. I love the premise, but I think the logline needs some more info????

@Roy Edmonson a logline is essentially an "elevator pitch", a matter of giving a small amount of info in the hopes it grips the attention of the reader. The summary would allow for more info.